Sunday, December 16, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday ~ Her Dark Hero 10



 
Hi Everyone!
 
Welcome—or welcome back—to my weekly six sentences of HER DARK HERO!

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Last week ended with our hero giving Jillian a lopsided smile after she’d lowered her voice, trying to soothe him…



His smile made her nervous and Jillian tried harder to get him to agree.

“It looks like you’re losing a lot of blood. You’re not going to be okay without some assistance. Let me call someone to help you.” Though she could have run back inside and made the call anyway, his agreement was important to her. She needed him to want her help.



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8 comments:

charmainegordon author said...

I'm concerned he'll bleed out but you won't let that happen. Please, Jane. I want a happy ever. . .

~Jane~ said...

LOL! Don't worry, Charmaine! He'll live and they'll get their happy ending!

Thanx for visiting! :)

~Jane~

Veronica Scott said...

Exciting excerpt, very tense...I definitely want to keep reading this story!

Jenna said...

I wonder why she feels she needs his approval? She needs to take charge or lots of bad things could happen to this guy. Exciting six!

Clare Davidson said...

Nice dialogue. I love how she's concerned for his feelings as much as for his physical well being. Good foundations for whatever might follow ;-)

~Jane~ said...

Thanx Everyone! :)

~Jane~

Jax Garren said...

Awww, I like it! A man asking for help. That's a rare thing. ;)

~Jane~ said...

Thanx for visiting, Jax! :)