Sunday, December 9, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday ~ Her Dark Hero 9


Hi Everyone! Welcome back to Six Sentence Sunday (SSS)!

Last week, our hero tried unsuccessfully to keep Jillian away. He’d almost succeeded until his turquoise eyes met hers and her fear melted away…


She didn’t want to leave him.

“You’re hurt, let’s get you inside and call for help.” As if soothing a wounded animal, she’d lowered her voice and tried to keep it level and calm.

“I’ll be okay, I just need a minute.” He’d lowered his voice as well and his eyes roamed her face. One side of his mouth turned up in a smile as his eyes met hers again.


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Happy Sunday! :)



Anonymous said...

ooooooooooh too cool! It just keeps getting better and better!

Clare Davidson said...

Interesting development. I'm glad she's not in any danger. I wonder what's going to happen next :)

charmainegordon author said...

A woman's instinct is to take care and you've caught the feeling so well. Thanks, Jane.

Veronica Scott said...

Intriguing excerpt and now I can't wait to see what happens next - great six!

Jenna said...

At least he's not being one of those guys who can't deal with a woman being nurturing. I can so see that one-sided smile! Nice six!

~Jane~ said...

Thanx Ladies! :)