Hi Everyone!
Welcome to more of HER DARK HERO!
Last week left off with Jillian on
the phone with Trey, the person Mark told her to call for help. This week we
pick up with Trey still talking…
“How
did you get this number?”
“Mark
gave it to me. He’s hurt.”
“Where
is he?”
She
gave the location and hung up the phone. When she went back out into the alley,
the silence was deafening.
Have fun! :)
5 comments:
Oh no! Has Mark slipped into unconsciousness? That's a bad sign. I hope Trey gets there soon to help. Great tension.
Frightening with no response. Hoping (and expecting) the best. Good writing, Jane.
Well now I'm worried about that silence in the alley!!! Very effective six, can't wait to read more.
Wonder if something / someone is waiting for her in the alley? Nice tension building
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