Sunday, January 13, 2013

Six Sentence Sunday ~ Her Dark Hero 14



 
Hi Everyone!

Welcome to more of HER DARK HERO!

Last week left off with Jillian on the phone with Trey, the person Mark told her to call for help. This week we pick up with Trey still talking…

 

“How did you get this number?”

“Mark gave it to me. He’s hurt.”

“Where is he?”

She gave the location and hung up the phone. When she went back out into the alley, the silence was deafening.
 


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5 comments:

Clare Davidson said...

Oh no! Has Mark slipped into unconsciousness? That's a bad sign. I hope Trey gets there soon to help. Great tension.

charmainegordon author said...

Frightening with no response. Hoping (and expecting) the best. Good writing, Jane.

Veronica Scott said...

Well now I'm worried about that silence in the alley!!! Very effective six, can't wait to read more.

S E Gilchrist said...

Wonder if something / someone is waiting for her in the alley? Nice tension building

~Jane~ said...

Thank you all for visiting/commenting! I appreciate it! :)